PoetryPix
depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
Look down
London blocks the view with buildings
Look up! cranes constructing more and higher still
Look out! pedestrians like bumper cars
the ambulant mobile-mesmerised
Observe the signs of instruction
cluttering streets, zombies
guided here to there with directions
Watch the rushing feet, weaving a fast lane
through the muddled mass of Londoners
Look down and see the pavements open up
mirror art picturing the world around
– puddles are our horizon
© Laura Granby 2016
Postscript: Leaving London for a few days in search of another city!
Joining with Claudette’s emotography event – pictures that move words!
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step into an other world
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perfectly put Diana
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Your words and Diana’s say it all. You are so creative and observant, Laura.
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thank you Beth – am a puddleophile!
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Love it Laura, thanks for joining in. Mostly we seem to only look straight ahead and never get the full view of life.
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I like the idea of your meme Claudette and this emotograph spoke volumes to me!
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Glad that it reached you all the way over there 🙂
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Love how these words move us through London….and what a perfect image!
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thank you Donna – these impressionistic words just flowed to the image of a London puddle!
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For the same reason as already stated, it looks like a portal leading to another world.. great catch !
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