Tempest

breeze poem
source@ hanginguptodry

it rhymes with ease
assists the bees
pollinates peas
ruffles some trees
lifts her chemise
makes music with keys
puts sail on flat seas
chalk and cheese
are gale and breeze
by steady degrees
rhyme fails to please
incoming tempest will shatter dry leaves

44 words for this week’s Quadrille @ DVerse on the theme ‘breeze’

29 Comments on “Tempest

    • thank you freya – unusual for me to be this light as a breeze!

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    • spot on Sasha it began like a Victorian riddle

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  1. This is fun to read with all the rhyming end words ~ Thanks for joining us Laura ~

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    • fun to join Grace – love the quadrille discipline behind the fun which trips along the tongue with this challenge

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    • dances like a ditty in this breeze 😉

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    • thank you Beth – must come and check the weather in your garden!

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    • Welcome Hank – your breeze is the one I wish I could have written though

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    • thank you Bryan – most unusual for me!

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    • thanks Mish – it somehow danced on to the page

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    • so hard to do rhyme seriously I find yet poets have always managed 😕

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  2. Oh no, your rhyme did not fail to please! 🙂

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    • did I dot the i’s and cross the t’s? thank you Rosemary

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    • many shattered leaves then – hope your garden goes with the flow

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