Tempest

29 Comments on “Tempest”

1. What a wonderful use of rhymes… you did the breeze with ease… (but you missed to link up)… good I could find my way back to you.

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   • will remember next time – assumed it would pingback!

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     • The prompt is still open… just head over and link-up… 🙂
       https://dversepoets.com/2016/05/30/quadrille-10/

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       • ahh missed Mr Linky!

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2. Lovely rhymes – made me smile!

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   • thank you freya – unusual for me to be this light as a breeze!

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3. Love the double meaning of “it rhymes with ease” 🙂

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   • spot on Sasha it began like a Victorian riddle

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4. This is fun to read with all the rhyming end words ~ Thanks for joining us Laura ~

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   • fun to join Grace – love the quadrille discipline behind the fun which trips along the tongue with this challenge

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5. Much fun!

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   • dances like a ditty in this breeze 😉

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6. Good one! 🙂

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   • thank you Beth – must come and check the weather in your garden!

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7. Very well thought off rhyming Laura! A smooth flow throughout!

   Hank

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   • Welcome Hank – your breeze is the one I wish I could have written though

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8. you made rhyming seem a breeze! Fun and delightful piece!

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   • thank you Bryan – most unusual for me!

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9. You created lots of fun with the rhythm and rhyme. Nice!

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   • thanks Mish – it somehow danced on to the page

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10. Fun use of rhyme. 🙂

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    • so hard to do rhyme seriously I find yet poets have always managed 😕

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11. Oh no, your rhyme did not fail to please! 🙂

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    • did I dot the i’s and cross the t’s? thank you Rosemary

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12. So clever – what a delight to read.

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    • thank you and a relief it was more delight than trite which concerned me somewhat

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      • Definately more delight. I worry about being trite as well. :o)

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13. fierce wind here this evening!

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    • many shattered leaves then – hope your garden goes with the flow

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