PoetryPix
depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
Tempest
it rhymes with ease
assists the bees
pollinates peas
ruffles some trees
lifts her chemise
makes music with keys
puts sail on flat seas
chalk and cheese
are gale and breeze
by steady degrees
rhyme fails to please
incoming tempest will shatter dry leaves
44 words for this week’s Quadrille @ DVerse on the theme ‘breeze’
29 Comments on “Tempest”
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What a wonderful use of rhymes… you did the breeze with ease… (but you missed to link up)… good I could find my way back to you.
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will remember next time – assumed it would pingback!
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The prompt is still open… just head over and link-up… 🙂
https://dversepoets.com/2016/05/30/quadrille-10/
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ahh missed Mr Linky!
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Lovely rhymes – made me smile!
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thank you freya – unusual for me to be this light as a breeze!
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Love the double meaning of “it rhymes with ease” 🙂
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spot on Sasha it began like a Victorian riddle
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This is fun to read with all the rhyming end words ~ Thanks for joining us Laura ~
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fun to join Grace – love the quadrille discipline behind the fun which trips along the tongue with this challenge
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Much fun!
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dances like a ditty in this breeze 😉
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Good one! 🙂
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thank you Beth – must come and check the weather in your garden!
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Very well thought off rhyming Laura! A smooth flow throughout!
Hank
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Welcome Hank – your breeze is the one I wish I could have written though
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you made rhyming seem a breeze! Fun and delightful piece!
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thank you Bryan – most unusual for me!
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You created lots of fun with the rhythm and rhyme. Nice!
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thanks Mish – it somehow danced on to the page
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Fun use of rhyme. 🙂
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so hard to do rhyme seriously I find yet poets have always managed 😕
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Oh no, your rhyme did not fail to please! 🙂
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did I dot the i’s and cross the t’s? thank you Rosemary
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So clever – what a delight to read.
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thank you and a relief it was more delight than trite which concerned me somewhat
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Definately more delight. I worry about being trite as well. :o)
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fierce wind here this evening!
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many shattered leaves then – hope your garden goes with the flow
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