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A Summer fête
Palloncino for bambino*
crowds push tighter into packs
purses strain with purchasing
cold drinks – hot dogs – fruit squash –
a dainty dachshund yelps below
silenced by a fallen ice-cream cone
buggy tied with blue balloons
hypnotises baby by the sway
mother wishes she could fly
Palloncino = balloon (ital). Summer Festival of Our Lady of Carmel, Clerkenwell, London for the Quadrille # 44
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You capture the fun and chaos really well🎈
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Vivid memories of this day Sarah as happened upon it out of the blue
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“mother wishes she could fly” — wooo, boy, do I feel this. Such a chaotic scene, beautifully told.
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Lovely comment! Colourful compact crowds and in their midst a balloon seller 🙂
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“a dainty dachshund ” luv the magic here
much love…
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Yes the Italians know how to celebrate- thank you Gillena
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Makes me feel as if I were there!
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Come next summer and you can be!!
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I think I know now why I prefer the silence of the mountain to the beach,… 🙂
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Or London streets?!
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I love the vivid picture you painted, especially the little dachshund.
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He was there so vividly recalled 😀
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Sounds chaotic, and no wonder mama wants to escape!
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Yes indeed – she has the same longing as the balloons for the great blue yonder above!
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Is pushchair another word for wheelchair? I was confused but sounded like a lovely day.
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Thank you Beckie for querying pushchairs = strollers or sometimes buggies and am changing that line as that fit better
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Oh! I just wasn’t sure what you meant but glad I could be of help! Lol!
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It sounds like the dog was happy. I like the idea of the balloons hypnotizing the infant.
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Dog was trodden on but yelping soon stopped when he saw the dropped 🍦
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