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depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
1. In search of the bull
I endlessly push aside the tall
grasses in search of the Ox…”
To begin with it’s a light-hearted venture
the way informal as an animal track
a definitive linear trampling
sets me wondering about wandering
pondering nothing in particular
just the thought of seeing something for its own sake
round and round the mirrored panorama of the marsh
restless reeds rustle up unease
yet still the inquiring mind calls out for more
louder than crickets chirping in a forest clearing
river rocks running against an inevitable flow
the reckless chatter of birds
they fly in my face these feathered frivolities
mobbing and mocking the tribulations of a beaten path
Then when I hear the hush that is the first commandment
aeolian dusts settle beneath the tired tread
and so too upon bovine hoof prints in the drying mud
just visible but proof enough the Ox is straying there ahead
and I shall hunt it down with curiosity and hunger
First poem of the series interpreting the ten oxherding pictures of zen meditation– see Poetry Project: 10 bulls
Just before my own weekend away and the dVerse summer break am joining Open Link #199
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This worked as a pastoral kind of poem, reminding me of bush walking in Africa (get me!!), but then I read your explanation, and read it again as a great extended metaphor for the process of meditation. I’m never sure how much explanation to put in about my work. I like the idea that people can read it for themselves, interpret it as they choose, but you added a whole other layer with yours. Something to think about.
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I know what you mean about explanation but the reference was necessary lest it looked as though I claimed the idea as my own when in fact it is a classical text on zen meditation – I just enjoyed re-thinking it for myself and liked your idea of going walkabout in the bush
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What excellent nourishment you serve in this establishment, Laura – so much food for thought 🙂
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what a lovely customer you are 😉
have a good weekend – I am off to the seaside rather than the bush!
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I do love the scene you set, and then even more when I hear your project of those 10 poems… sounds like a wonderful project.
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It’s a very recent idea but I think I shall like ox herding with photo art to inspire the poems – enjoy the summer break!
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I read, inhaled, listened and still I must ponder and return. Your work demands that much of me to read, muse, and then come back for another drink.
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Please do Jilly & thank you for lovely words
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I liked the sounds of these lines: “wondering about wandering
pondering nothing in particular”
This is the first time I’ve heard of The Ten Bulls. It seems like a worthwhile project to write ten poems to go with those images.
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Thank you Frank – must try and keep to this wondering pondering form too as I develop the series
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I admire the use of sounds in your second stanza ~ An interesting scene and project ~ I wish you success for this & happy writing ~
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The sounds are an important step in the journey – glad you noticed!
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As I read this I thought how Zen-like and then your comment at the end. Love it!
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How reassuring – am on the right track at least Victoria!
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Laura this is fabulous and I so drawn to this project….I am ignorant of the Ten Bulls so I was happy to read more about them. And as always your picture is just exquisite art intertwined with such vivid images painted by your words!
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What a very nice comment Donna and yes the images are a big part of the project – as I create them, the poetry begins to form
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