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depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
the jar is ajar
unkindest of karmas
a girl growing full of curiosity
hidden with the forbidden
just an apple or a sealed vessel
– if worlds tilt on such equations
what hope? yet peppered with the punitive
our speck of salvation
to reach again or uncork the jar
Bringing creation myths to the fore in 44 words for De’s quadrille: Hope
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I am nuts over this:
“a girl growing full of curiosity
hidden with the forbidden
just an apple or a sealed vessel
if worlds tilt on such equations”
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appreciate your nuts 🙂
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Giggles. 🙂
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Myths of creation indeed!
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at least hope was in at the start
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Oh I see how we manage to bring down the bright-eyed hope… is it really growing up or being tethered for that child?
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its in Pandora’s jar still 😉
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Laura, I just love the way this is worded:
“if worlds tilt on such equations
what hope?”
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hope does seem a far cry for the world sometimes but I felt more positive today – thanks to your prompt!
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“…our speck of creation to reach again…..” What I love most about human nature, is how the spirit wants to rise……..
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indeed our saving grace Sherry
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I agree with Sherry. I love this creative and intelligent poem.
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thank you for that very nice comment
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‘if worlds tilt on such equations what hope?’ this is so powerful!
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glad you liked it Sanaa – thank you
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hidden with the forbidden
just an apple or a sealed vessel
It will unnecessarily limit the initiative and learning experience. It just isn’t fair in the growing years!
Hank
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