the jar is ajar

16 Comments on “the jar is ajar”

1. I am nuts over this:

   “a girl growing full of curiosity
   hidden with the forbidden
   just an apple or a sealed vessel
   if worlds tilt on such equations”

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   • appreciate your nuts 🙂

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     • Giggles. 🙂

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2. Myths of creation indeed!

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   • at least hope was in at the start

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3. Oh I see how we manage to bring down the bright-eyed hope… is it really growing up or being tethered for that child?

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   • its in Pandora’s jar still 😉

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4. Laura, I just love the way this is worded:
   “if worlds tilt on such equations
   what hope?”

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   • hope does seem a far cry for the world sometimes but I felt more positive today – thanks to your prompt!

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5. “…our speck of creation to reach again…..” What I love most about human nature, is how the spirit wants to rise……..

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   • indeed our saving grace Sherry

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6. I agree with Sherry. I love this creative and intelligent poem.

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   • thank you for that very nice comment

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7. ‘if worlds tilt on such equations what hope?’ this is so powerful!

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   • glad you liked it Sanaa – thank you

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8. hidden with the forbidden
   just an apple or a sealed vessel

   It will unnecessarily limit the initiative and learning experience. It just isn’t fair in the growing years!

   Hank

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