PoetryPix
depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
dead end
The book has closed
pages by the hundred read
most words understood
the plot thickened
intermittently thinned
scenes manifested
storylines soared
characters drawn and quartered
I the reader entered
listened and witnessed
thrilled, perturbed
despaired, agitated
and finally – dejected?
– relieved?
always a bit dead
at The End
Exploring the voiced dental stop d which in English sounds an abrupt conclusion when placed at the end of words. Although I did not enter NaPoWriMo2018 I am ending the month with the Ladies in Waiting prompt from Elizabeth that includes a choice of concluding words from Final to Over
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Like this Laura. I’m also a reader of mysteries and know exactly how you feel. Thanks so much for joining us, and I did respond to your comment. And your right about those words The End.
Elizabeth
https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2018/04/30/teaching-the-teacher/
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yes thank you Elizabeth for all these prompts and for the enlightenment re your dragons
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That’s supposed to be you’re…it is getting tired out.
Elizabeth
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those pesky apostrophes!
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Nice!
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I forget who said endings should be neither happy or sad – just satisfactory. I can even feel sad at happy endings
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Me, too!
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Spot on, Laura. When I started reading to my granddaughter, we always made a point of saying together, rather vigorously, The End, when we had reached the last word. The end is THE END! And Happy May 1 tomorrow, our 47th wedding anniversary.
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And that is that! And May you and yours have many more beginnings – Bravo!
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