The year the Church exploded East
from West, one heavenly body
collapsed, majestically. A daystar blazing
like a Venus, now milky veiled and nebulous.
We see it there, between Taurean horns
a mighty, pulsing heart, its neutron core
still polarising crab-like, particles of ore
Just 44 words for Merril’s Quadrille prompt: Feeling Crabby
Brilliant paring of the Great Schism and the Crab Nebula!
a happenstance or maybe a consequential event!
Poetry!
❤
Hear, hear! Masterful, I’d say! ❤
~David
I really appreciate your saying David
I love this, Laura! I couldn’t quite get the history into mine. So beautifully crafted!
thank you Merril and for the prompt – great minds eh!?
You’re very welcome, Laura. 😉
Such great images. I love your take on the prompt.
thanks Dwight – major happenings in tandem
You are welcome.
A stunning supernova, Laura! I love the intertwining threads of history and astronomy, and the daystar ‘milky veiled and nebulous’.
many thanks Kim – they intertwined themselves
You’re most welcome, Laura.
A most exquisite supernova, Laura! I love “a daystar blazing like a Venus, now milky veiled and nebulous.” ❤️❤️
many thanks Sanaa – appaently for 1 month was seen in the day sky and the Chinese called it ‘the guest star’
What a spectacular sight this is. Love the heavenly body, the daystar blazing like a Venus.
thank you Grace – now I see the mirroring of heavenly body and Venus besides the daystar phenomenon
Written by a dedicated sky gazer.
thanks Lisa – a fascinated viewer though the science still baffles
You’re welcome, Laura.
As beautiful as the nebula itself. (K)
thank you Kerfe – such very nice words
HI Laura, this is really lovely.
much appreciated Roberta
My pleasure, I can’t comment on your latest tribute poem to Sarah. It is very touching.
I did not manage to do one in time but am thinking of a future OLN instead
I also didn’t manage to write on time.
not too late now as the time has been extended
Okay, I feel I can’t write for this particular prompt right now. My aunt is very ill in hospital so the topic is just too hard.
A fabulous masterclass in interwining history with astronomy in just 44 words!
yes it was rather a lot to fit the quadrille so many thanks for such praise
My pleasure, Laura.
“its neutron core still polarising crab-like”: a brilliant image that works on multiple levels, Laura. Some fracturing events, still ongoing, seem written in the stars.
thank you -yes a supernova metaphor as well Dora!
An interesting presentation for you to do. I’m getting more and more tuned to the “revelations” of a secular understanding, which has a whole lot to say about who and what we are. Even the parts we don’t understand have meaning too.
church history, astronomy, physics – I’m interested in all from the novice’s perspective
p.s. have begun reading Revelations recently!