A long road
horizon's far distant
destination sign
sets my wayward nerve
a jangling. Till tiring
of perpetual parallels
like that on-the-spot
Red Queen's race*
I retire.
Give me blind bends
those out-of sight turnings.
It's curiosity
that keeps this pilgrim
to the path
- from Alice through the Looking Glass – Lewis Carrol
Just 44 words for Lisa’s quadrille prompt: Around the Bend
I love the references to Alice, Laura, and I love this poem, especially the final stanza. I’m off to visit Ellen and the grandsons on 1st September, and hope to have a trip to Guildford, where the Alice in Wonderland statue is – there’s a great children’s playground there where we used to take Lucas when he was very young, before they moved.
“you see, it takes all the running you can do, to keep in the same place.” – I tried to capture this in that first stanza so thanks for that Kim
p.s I somehow missed Alice in my Guildford visits and as a child I found the Alice stories rather disconcerting until hippie days of Grace Slick and “White Rabbit”!
I love Jefferson Airplane!
great taste Kim!
Laura wonderful turn/volta. It’s knowing no matter what is around that corner, you can handle it and there’s at least a 50/50 chance whatever it is will be hella good/fun/etc.
thanks for your comment and for this inspiring prompt Lisa – despite not being an optimist, I always believe the best is just around the bend. Perversely the straight and narrow is not for me as the turn represents curiosity which keeps me going/seeking
You’re most welcome.
I’m sure no one else will comment on the fact you ended your poem without punctuation.😅 It speaks to me. It fits.
I like how you spotted the not so deliberate mistake Melissa
It’s the little things. The broken rules that I adore.❤️
Just noticed this thanks to Melissa. Brilliantly done, Laura!
Yep. Some (i.e. Most) of the time all those unbent straight and narrow highways’ll put you to sleep.
Dug this piece bigtime. Thanks L.
many thanks for the dig, Ron
Wonderful embrace of the essence of curiosity my friend. What is ahead, over the rise, round the bend, into the mists of time? 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
thanks Rob – “may the road rise to meet you” too
i like the initial uneasiness of this journey, coupled with the growing tiredness, and then the determination to keep seeking! … ever curious. enjoyed, immensely.
thank you Ren for your observations – straight roads are the most tiring as even cloisters had bends 😉
I love that last stanza and heartily agree. The road needs mystery. (K)
ahh yes and I’m of an age now where I don’t want answers to the mystery – let it be!
I really enjoy poetry alluding to great works…takes it to another love, and the concept of it not being a straight road very clever..
Lewis Carroll captured that long, tiring road feeling so well with his Red Queen race – the Romans moving their troops built them all that way – quicker ultimately than the curves, the go rounds but with a lack allure and curiosity
A great poem, Laura. I also like bends in the road
thanks Roberta
I really love the ending with the pilgrim and curiosity keeping them on track; it reminds me of explorations of nature that are always so inviting with their curvy paths.
exactly – each twist and turn leads us on!
Very nicely done, Laura.
thanks Dwight
You are welcome.
oooh – I love the contrast you’ve drawn, Laura! bends while driving (for me) may keep things interesting but they also making driving more stressful!
~David
many thanks David for being an appreciative pedestrian here!
🚶♂️
Fantastic poem, Laura. I agree that twists and turns that engage curiousity are the best.
thank you Nicole for your appreciation
Just like children, I believe we still need to feed that sense of exploration. Those “blind bends” do help us along. Love this ode to curiosity, Laura.
yes I guess it is that childish wonder Mish – thank goodness!
I love, ‘out-of-sight turnings’.
thank you!
Yes to curiosity Laura
it killed the cat but prolongs our attention for life!
Ah, yes indeed 🙂