i
Cut to the chase
précis the prose
polish the words
notes in a song
thread them along
bracelet for tongue
ii
But where to begin?
In a desert, distilling dry air
some drips of condensation
some half-sensed sense
a semblance of sentence
a stuttering of lines that slip
in, down and past the part
where rhymes like uncaged lions
pace, as pendulum, as meter
between syllable and silence
iii
Into mixed company, comes my poetry
often you I mourn, and with a chalice
of sweet bitterness, him as Merlin.
Death prowls by inference, deals the knave
of hearts, damns the course of romance
and dammed it is too with millponds
where I've drowned so many foolish drafts.
But epic's just eponymous, trivia is trumps
and this sphere's so full of beautiful blown roses
west wind has summoned early snows.
For Grace’s MTB prompt- Revisiting Ars Poetica she encourages us to show how our poetry comes to life through imagery, symbolism, and/or personalization.
So many great imageries, especially those uncaged lion.
thank you
I smiled at the wordplay in your title, Laura, and love the alliteration and rhymes in the first stanza – I had to read it aloud! The second stanza resonated, starting with the familiar , the sibilant ‘half-sensed sense’, ‘semblance of a of sentence’ and ‘stuttering of lines that slip’. But oh, these lines are beautiful:
‘…and this sphere’s so full of beautiful blown roses
west wind has summoned early snows’.
I thought of you when I found the title as I know you too like wordplay. Thank you Kim for taking time to comment on all 3 parts and the ultimate couplet appreciation ❤️
My pleasure, Laura. ❤
What a powerful arsenal of poetry Laura. I love the second part with rhymes like uncaged lions and the third part mixed company, with millponds of foolish drafts. This is a heady work and I love it. Have a good summer break!
I loved the revisit so thank you for prompting this and also for your encouraging feedback as I did wonder if the poem had strayed off.
P.s enjoy a well deserved summer break