An unbundling

“And sentiment, fruitless as dust in cupped hands”

And    
is so very inclusive. A knotted ampersand
joined up in a glyph, like the also you of me.
Trailing that sense of the furthermore, a dreamer's

sentiment
out from the soul's depths. At times a shallow ripple
a belief it's just fast food for valentines on the go.
I keepsake you still in 3-D though any sense of we is

fruitless.
In this very singular afterlife, the point is taken,
a cornucopia mostly empty, trees quite often bare.
But these winters have had the plumiest blues

as
what? What shall I liken them to? Those eyes
from a Cossack genepool, still with a hint of pillage?
Since then you've passed, in the way that

dust
settles after footfalls across forsaken floors. I dredge
imagery, pluck memory specks from air. Smutty fragments
went with your ashes clean out to sea. Here I remain

in
love of sorts, with a rakish ghost What matters most
is within, interiors that can shut out the dark, since fatalism
has become so fashionable. There's a shell

cupped
to my ear for listening to the rub of tides over stone.
Its a concave bell, a breathing sea exhaling ozone
for our inspiration. Holding me hollow without

hands.
And so I help others picking over tidelines.
We write our names at the waters edge and clap
each one that's washed away. A passing ovation.

6 thoughts on “An unbundling

  1. In this “unbundling” of grief and loss, Laura, I love how your use of enjambment in the acrostic speaks to the pouring out of “sentiment/out of the soul’s depths.” This and every device of rhetoric is a lyrical outpouring of what death means to the living even as we speak to the dead, as in this line which is so very poignant: “I keepsake you still in 3-D . . . .”

  2. I love the way you unbundled the line, Laura, especially the ‘knotted ampersand joined up in a glyph’ and the clever use of enjambment. I also love:

    ‘dust
         settles after footfalls across forsaken floors. I dredge
         imagery, pluck memory specks from air…’

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