Some Fragments for Carson

“Every tree a word does your heart stop?”

So they prized you with the Nobel
golden gong that clangs the loudest
in this whirly world of words

they say you listen to the wind
is that how verses come to you?
then surely it's an autumn wind
or Fall as you might say

a wild tumbling collective
stanzas like blown leaves
different, too disconnected
for one tree

but a constancy
surely trees then
more lovely than just one poem
God's woods1 of poetry
knee-deep littering
fragrant with pine

and on the top most branches
the insightful bird spies

and whistles what to write
  1. see her poem Town on the way through God’s Woods from which the epigraph is taken ↩︎

4 thoughts on “Some Fragments for Carson”

  1. If only it was that simple but I love the homage to her writing with: whirly world of words. The ending lines are superb:
    the insightful bird spies
    and whistles what to write

  2. Beautiful fragments, Laura, especially:

    ‘a wild tumbling collective
    stanzas like blown leaves
    different, too disconnected
    for one tree’

    and

    ‘God’s woods1 of poetry
    knee-deep littering
    fragrant with pine’.

    I know that bird.

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