PoetryPix
depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
a lively canvas
We considered her moody –
our assertions brushed off
a swirl, a sweep
some severe crosshatching
to overturn the green flat wash
“I’m a quick-change artist”
(her jaunty joke before tantrums)
now tearily dabbing a filbert
she pitched powdered pink
– a mercurial touch to finish
Weaving ‘quick’ into a fairly rapid quadrille for De’s “Quick, Write something‘ prompt
And since I was fairly slow on the Monday uptake, am joining the Tuesday Platform
38 Comments on “a lively canvas”
Feedback is food for thought....
Conversations
Poetry in Print
“I am a quick-change artist,” works like a charm. I love when poems draw such compelling character-sketches. The artist becomes the art in such a setting. Very well-penned.
-HA
LikeLike
had to think on my feet with this one – glad you enjoyed the character sketch – the photoart helped make the prompt as the artist here is so serene!
LikeLike
I enjoyed your pink and green poem!
LikeLike
my grandmother used to say “pink and green should never be seen” or was it “green and pink fit for the sink”?!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very clever. Nice write!
LikeLike
thank you
LikeLike
I really enjoyed the motif running through this
LikeLike
Enjoyed the theme through this. Lovely.
LikeLike
appreciate your appreciation Anita
LikeLike
I love the audience and the artist, the complete presence as the art is created out of her moods. The pace and the amazing places you go from moody, jaunty jokes and tears, the swirls and sweeps and severe cross-hatching. I resonate with this so!
LikeLike
You have seen it just as I imagined – thank you for your insights – there is a bit of her in me too but without the talent!
LikeLike
This was really cool, loved it.
LikeLike
That’s good – thank you Vicki
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is absolutely exquisite! ❤ I can picture the character and loved the phrase “I’m a quick-change artist” 😊
LikeLike
That phrase set the scene as needed something to get the theme rolling – thanks for hosting TP and for your lovely comment
LikeLike
Nice line: “she pitched powdered pink” and visible on the canvas.
LikeLike
Tossed in my usual alliteration there Frank
LikeLike
This is so much fun to read aloud – such a bright, fun canvas of words.
LikeLike
Your prompt brought this out – surprised myself with humour!
LikeLike
A fun read of pink and green. Oddly, my bedroom as a teen and adult was apple green and rose pink.
LikeLike
It’s a colour scheme I rather like now hence the photoart which jollies the temperamental artist along
LikeLike
This is really a transformation… I feel like a change happening in the ladies’ room… for me it would be a before and an after…
LikeLike
That’s a unique interpretation Björn
LikeLike
A colorful and creative write!
LikeLike
Thank you Carrie
LikeLike
Poetry about art always rings my bells (well, most of the time) and fills me with the urge to paint again if only I can clear my table! This worked well.
LikeLike
my ‘paintings’ make no mess and only take up disc space – I remain a frustrated artist but hope you can find the urge to bring out your talent
LikeLike
The contrasts of the language – severe, tantrum, pitched – against the soft colors – brilliantly crafted.
LikeLike
thank you Jilly – moods are like brush strokes – they set the scene!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I loved the painting which is of course all about feeling so the poem was ideal accompaniment.
LikeLike
thank you – one of my ‘not up to scratch’ photos heavily disguised with smart photo editor. Created separately from the poem but waiting in the wings for its debut
LikeLike
‘quick-change artist’ nice usage …nice write
LikeLike
Capture so well how emotions shift and sturm not as a weakness subservient to a forced stoicism, but an affirmation to live a broad spectrum, the jaunty, plucky, tearful, mercurial, ranges. So nice to be fully human!
LikeLike
I like how you describe moods as broad spectrum
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m thinking about Spring at the moment (beginning now in this part of the world) and your poem – although I knew it was a person you were describing – read like a personification of Spring, with those colours and the changeable moods!
LikeLike
nice interpretation Rosemary from the other side of my world 🙂 I think maybe the photoartist started out with Spring in mind!
LikeLike
Stunning lines, Laura:
‘a swirl, a sweep
some severe crosshatching
to overturn the green flat wash’
and
‘“I’m a quick-change artist”’
LikeLike
thank you Kim – giving it a quick whirl with the virtual paintbrush
LikeLiked by 1 person