27 thoughts on “the canary”

1. I actually know that poetisa… we had a prompt on her by Grace on toads years ago. I remember I was especially taken in by her poem “declaration of love”… the love under the threat of missiles… I didn’t know that she had died so recently.

   1. a good memory you have! I have just discovered her – and that poem amongst many others

2. The culmination of both the summer and the poetess’ words is quite a lovely parallel. Also, canary and death always make for an evocative combination. I really liked this bit: “we’ll reap her repertoire for seeds/press each and every poem between dry pages”. The canary’s sadness is felt in that last line.
   -HA

   1. thank you HA – the canary became a potent motif as the poem developed – I was saddened by her death and not having known much of her before

3. The caged canary is sadness itself, crusted in its corner, pressed seeds and falling geraniums. I love your images. They take me along a bright Cuban street.

   1. Really appreciate your comment Jane – conjuring Cuba as best as I could imagine!

      1. It fooled me 🙂

4. Cuba itself is the canary, and midst the poverty and authoritarian rule, poetry and literature still thrive; tribute to the human spirit. You put me in mind of the canary in the coal mine; very evocative tribute.

   1. What ever the personal and political circumstances poetry bubbles to the surface – glad you liked this tribute to Labra

5. Nice line: “press each and every poem between dry pages”

   1. Thanks Frank

6. This is wonderfully rich, evocative and lyrical in its portrayal of loss and death.. especially love; “we’ll reap her repertoire for seeds press each and every poem between dry pages.” ❤

   1. Those penultimate lines came to me last – sent by the canary perhaps! Thank you Sanaa

7. She is wonderful passionate poet and I didn’t know that she had died too. I find poets who write in a different language, has a unique way of expressing themselves. Thanks for reminding me about the beauty of her work.

   1. I like Spanish language poets most because I love and learn it. Hope this poem was tribute enough to her beautiful work

8. I’ve had this experience of encounter and discovery of recent death…it has its own sadness. Your poem makes me want to read this poet.

   1. There are English version on poetry sites the above link you can read and hear in Spanish –

9. Nice. Hope someone will press our poems between dry pages one day.

   1. Not sure about that – am currently self printing as all mine are virtual on here

      1. Me too…but you never know.

10. Your poem is so delicate and sad, Laura. I love the the brightness of the opening lines with their canary yellow and crisp, gilded notes of song, the surprise of the discomforted vermillion geraniums and the poetisa’s funeral. I also enjoyed the alliteration and contrast in the lines:
    ‘the lascivious pen lying low at last
    her tongue silent, once so foreign sounding
    huskily brusque in that Cuban Spanish way’.

11. That is how I intended so good to know you heard it as delicate and sad – many thanks Kim

12. I’m not familiar with her work but your poem is a heart-tugging tribute!

    1. thank you Lynn – discovering poets is half the fun of our blog enterprise

13. and we’ll reap her repertoire for seeds
    press each and every poem between dry pages

    my favourite lines,

    your poetry has finesse, graceful really, very gentle as it flows out to the reader.

    1. very nice comment Gina – I like your description of the flow

14. The yellow is such a strong image…beautifully painted scene. (K)

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