PoetryPix
depictions by the rule of thirds; descriptions mostly freestyle words
Imaginings
Chromatic conjurer by night
vivid sights for flight and fright
cryptic signs in lust’s designs
guessing games of who entwines
shape-shift scenes, expectant pause
door to door down corridors
coming up for words and air
remarkably bare
this waking dream
almost monochrome it seems
A touch of escapism as De asks us to Dream for Quadrille #38 And finding more poets in the Imaginary Garden’s Tuesday Platform
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‘expectant pause door to door down corridors coming up for words and air remarkably bare this waking dream almost monochrome it seems’ .. Sigh… Wonderfully captivating!❤️
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catching the dream Sanaa 😉
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Those waking dreams are the most vivid I think… maybe it’s because we can control them a bit…
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ah but is this existence perhaps a waking dream?
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I love this form, the rhythm and rhyme……..and wonderful word combinations. Loved this.
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thanks for the reassuring comment Sherry as somehow the rhythm took hold – bit like the witches of Macbeth- bit relieved when it broke at the end like waking from a dream state
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coming up for words and air … especially liked that line and the image it created in scary monochrome! (I was thinking of shape shifting too, though in a different context!)
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thank you! am coming over to see how you shifted shape –
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Your poem has an excellent pace – it matches the content very well.
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far from dreamy this sequence – thank you Kerry
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Such gorgeous gorgeous use of rhyme here!
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so unusual for me too – did not know I dreamt in rhyme! thank you for prompt and prod to get the poetry ink flowing again
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Great work, I like the chromatic idea, though first I thought it was a musical reference. 🙂
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had to double check when the word first came to me! you are musical so it must have sounded like that 🙂
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Great rhymes in this. Your painting is perfect with the words of this.
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Thank you – Finally found a poem to match this photoart which I dreamt up some while ago
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I like the painting very much!
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appreciate your appreciation ❤ – another pastime of mine to transform some of my photos
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You have an excellent pastime.
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I liked the “monochrome” waking dream and coming up for words and air.
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Coming up for air out of the deep – dreaming =diving?
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‘Chromatic conjurer’ – a marvelous alliterative phrase, Laura, which is beautifully illustrated by the image. I also enjoyed the internal rhyme of ‘light/fright’, signs/designs, door/corridors. I almost felt sucked into the waking dream.
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Thank you for a lovely comment Kim – got sucked into rhyme with this one. Poems have their own momentum it seems.
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They do!
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Luv the shift that takes place after
“coming up for words and air”
Puts everything in perspective
much love…
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thanks Gillena – the perspective of waking perhaps?!
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An abstract waking dream!
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and playing with the idea of do we dream we are awake Bev
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Very abstract – read it more than once and I came up with various thoughts each time…
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great compliment if a poem is read more than once – thank you Margaret
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‘waking dream’ in monochrome is so very poignant.
Hope the comment posts now. I’ve been trying comment here since yesterday.
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oh thank you for all your attempts Sumana- as a fellow WordPresser there should be no problems for you (I often find google id and bloggers blogs a struggle sometimes)
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Interesting “waking dream” to go with chromatic painting!
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thank you Lynn – an apt comment for life as it reminds me of the Chinese blessing/curse ‘interesting times’
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A waking dream seems so real or is it the mind retreating within the atmosphere we inhabit at any moment in time…You’ve given me lots to ponder.
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as you have me! 🙂
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The abstract dream within a dream; awake or asleep; drifting. Image and words so interweave.
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