Merlin

Mighty the Wizard/ Who found me at sunrise
 Sleeping, and woke me/ And learn'd me Magic!
Merlin and the Gleam ~ Tennyson

You ascribed it to allure
yet you it was who lured us
over bold, bare mountains with phantasy
and promises of spellbound visions
I, bewitched by nightly whisperings
and Romanesque expression
blushed and begged
more magic before the candle guttered
and wax went cold

Making photoart out of Henry Moore's 'King & Queen' & some MAGIC in just 44 words (excluding Tennyson quote) for Linda's Quadrille @dversepoets

34 thoughts on “Merlin

      1. Haha, who knows. My boyfriend was watching a show on HBO the other night all about robots and artificial intelligence. The picture on your post made me think of that.

  1. Merlin is my favourite wizard of all time, Laura, and I enjoyed the trip over the mountains of myth and legend. Candles are so important when casting spells.

  2. So good this. I like the Tennyson reference and how you’ve captured (in this small form) Morgana’s desire (for love, for magic, for knowledge), his dissembling and withholding and her frustration (and everything that flows from it) – hinted in the terrific last line.

  3. The extension of the trope “the candle guttered” with the wholly original “wax went cold” just sent chills down my spine.

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